一、寫作思路
首段:這類題目通常會給出一句名人名言,首段可以對此名人名言進行闡述,提出關(guān)注細節(jié)的重要性。
關(guān)鍵點:解釋名人名言,提出文章中心。
中段:通過具體事例來論述細節(jié)的重要性??忌梢赃x擇用兩個正面例子來闡述,比如蘋果公司對細節(jié)的關(guān)注造就了該公司的卓越;也可以采用一正例一反例的論述方式,反例可以舉某個公司因?qū)毠?jié)的疏忽而走向衰落的例子。
關(guān)鍵點:選擇有說服力的論據(jù)來論證觀點,事實論據(jù)更勝于講道理。
末段:提出個人觀點,說明細節(jié)的重要性,要獲得成功,注重細節(jié)是必不可少的品質(zhì)。
關(guān)鍵點:強調(diào)細節(jié)的重要性。
二、參考范文和譯文
參考范文
Details Make a Difference
That details make a difference is an old saying known to people all over the world. Details are important to success in business and in every walk of life. Details can make the difference between two things that appear similar, but in reality are very different in quality.
There are several examples which can be cited to illustrate this concept. The first one is the Apple Corporation. The late CEO, Steve Jobs, was addicted to details. He could not stop pushing his staff to pursue perfection in design and production. Due to his focus on details, Apple made great success in the mobile field, producing products that were not only innovative, but also superior. Immediately, others copied these ideas, but they did not take the importance of details into account. Some manufacturers did not follow strict rules in their production and turned a blind eye to tiny problems.Their products looked similar to Apple’s, but closer inspection showed they were not as good. This is just one example that shows the importance of stressing details. Another example is the great masterpiece of Chinese paintings which consists of thousands of skills for mountains, figures or rivers. All of these need focus on details.
From my perspective, it is important to emphasize details in daily life and work. Success can only come by this kind of conscientiousness.