Is It Necessary to Attend Training Classes?
According to the graph, great changes have taken place in the number of training classes in the past ten years. On the one hand, from 2004 to 2007, the increase of the training classes was not so great. On the other hand, there has been a sharp increase in the training classes after 2010.
There are three reasons for the change. Firstly, with the development of the society, more people pay much attention to the improvement of their ability, and they hope to improve through training classes. Secondly, to most people, training plays a direct part in helping them to attain their goal quickly and efficiently. Thirdly, with the improvement of the people's living standards, more and more people regard it as a preferable way to spend their spare time.
As for me, it is necessary to attend training classes. For one thing, they can play a very important role in helping you to attain your goal quickly and efficiently. For another, you can learn not only what you need quickly but also a new way to broaden your horizon. (180 words)
according to... 根據(jù)......
take place 發(fā)生
on the one/other hand
一方面/另一方面
firstly; secondly; thirdly
首先；其次；再次
improvement n. 提高
attain their goal 達到他們的目的
regard...as... 把......當(dāng)作......
as for me 對于我來說
not only...but also... 不僅......而且......
broaden your horizon 開闊你的視野
是否有必要參加培訓(xùn)班？
由圖表可知，培訓(xùn)班的數(shù)量在過去十年中有了翻天覆地的變化：其一，從2004年到2007年培訓(xùn)班數(shù)量的增長并不顯著；其二，2010年后培訓(xùn)班數(shù)量急劇增加。
這種變化是由三大原因引起的。首先，隨著社會的發(fā)展，越來越多的人注重自身能力的培養(yǎng)，他們希望通過培訓(xùn)班來提高水平。其次，對于大部分人而言，培訓(xùn)班能快速、有效地幫助他們達到目標(biāo)。第三，隨著人們生活水平的提高，越來越多的人將參加培訓(xùn)班視為打發(fā)業(yè)余時間的最佳途徑。
對我而言，參加培訓(xùn)班是十分必要的。一方面，它們在你快速有效地實現(xiàn)目標(biāo)的過程中起著至關(guān)重要的作用。另一方面，你不僅能迅速掌握所需技能，而且也能學(xué)到一種開拓眼界的新方式。
1. Firstly, with the development of the society, more people pay much attention to the improvement of their ability, and they hope to improve through training classes. 首先，隨著社會的發(fā)展，越來越多的人注重自身能力的培養(yǎng)，他們希望通過培訓(xùn)班來提高水平。
2. Secondly, to most people, training plays a direct part in helping them to attain their goal quickly and efficiently. 其次，對于大部分人而言，培訓(xùn)班能快速、有效地幫助他們達到目標(biāo)。
3. Thirdly, with the improvement of the people's living standards, more and more people regard it as a preferable way to spend their spare time. 第三，隨著人們生活水平的提高，越來越多的人將參加培訓(xùn)班視為打發(fā)業(yè)余時間的最佳途徑。
