2014年英語四級寫作跑題得扣多少分

　　寫作是綜合評分，既看內(nèi)容的切題，也看語言質(zhì)量、字?jǐn)?shù)、甚至?xí)鴮懙龋]有具體規(guī)定哪一項(xiàng)多少分。一般來說跑題影響還是比較大的，根據(jù)跑題的嚴(yán)重性，會(huì)影響1/3到2/3的分?jǐn)?shù)。但是由于是綜合考量，所以如果其他部分做的好，比如語言質(zhì)量高，錯(cuò)誤少，字?jǐn)?shù)較多，字體工整，還會(huì)挽回一些分?jǐn)?shù)的。但語言質(zhì)量和語言錯(cuò)誤的多少必須看到具體作文才能下結(jié)論。所以你光告訴我你“寫的還行”、“錯(cuò)誤不是很多”，我是無法貿(mào)然告訴你分?jǐn)?shù)的，因?yàn)槟愣疾灰欢ㄖ滥隳膬哄e(cuò)了。下面是去年6月四級評分樣卷的8分(按滿分15計(jì)算)的代表，供大家參考。

　　2013年6月真題

　　Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on theremark “A smile is the shortest distance between two people.”You can cite examples toillustrate your point. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

　　樣卷：

　?、貼owadays it is easier for us to meet more and more people who even didn’t know us. Howcan we make friend with them as fast as possible. A smile may be is the shortest distancebetween two people.

　　In my point of view, someone’s first sight is important for others to recognize him. A personwho is always smiling would easy to be regarded as easy going and warm heart. Otherwise hemay be thought as curious. Second, smiling can cheer others up. In the daily life, we are alwaysexpecting someone smile to us when we feel disappointed. We will soon form a goodrelationship between us. Last but not the least, smiling can also calm yourself down when youmeet strangers or someone important. For example, when you are going to attend aninterview or make reported to your new boss, it is good for us to smile before your speeching.Others will think that you have prepared for it and are worth to trust.

　　Because of the three reasons I have told before, I deeply believe a smile is the best way for usto make friends and shorten the distance between others.

　　通篇看來，這篇作文做到了基本上做到了內(nèi)容切題，層次清楚。但是，文章的語言出現(xiàn)了較多的語法錯(cuò)誤，其中有一些是嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤。有些地方表達(dá)思想不夠清楚，文字勉強(qiáng)連貫。因此，按照15分為滿分的分制，這篇文章得8分。