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2010年12月四級(jí)考試寫作加分技巧

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高分作文標(biāo)志

  1、四級(jí)120-150字;六級(jí)150-180字;

  2、是否長短句交叉;

  3、用詞是否恰當(dāng),準(zhǔn)確,形象,盡量使用能夠吸引閱卷老師眼球的閃光詞;

  4、關(guān)鍵詞是否換用,切勿老用重復(fù)詞;

  下面給出寫好一篇作文的注意事項(xiàng):

  1、適當(dāng)用被動(dòng)代替主動(dòng),這樣能更客觀的反映事實(shí), 句子開頭不要總是用we / I (比如寫結(jié)尾時(shí)不用 we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to. )舉個(gè)經(jīng)典結(jié)尾2004年六月六級(jí)作文的最后一段:It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that. Thus, its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively.

  2、善于使用插入語,比如說把副詞、連接詞等,作插入語放在中間,一般放在主語、動(dòng)詞或者助動(dòng)詞后,兩邊分別加上逗號(hào)。

  如however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入語放在中間,一般放在動(dòng)詞,助動(dòng)詞后,兩邊分別加上逗號(hào)。

  比如說: Other individuals, however, take the attitude that …

  3、一定要學(xué)會(huì)換詞,換形象,具體的代替太寬泛的。(考試中一般不要出現(xiàn)good, bad , many, thing, think, people, opinion 等等)比如上面例子中,applicable代替proper, approaches代替ways, implement代替 carry out, sharpen one’’s competitive edge代替 enhance one’’s competitiveness(提高某物競爭力)

  下面舉一篇優(yōu)秀作文(14分)的例子,看看他是如何運(yùn)用各類寫作技巧的。

  Computer and I By Simmy

  I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that i indulged myself in googling an army of useful information i had expected ,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music. That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me.

  exceedingly 替換 very

  thrilling 替換 exciting

  sth. exert a tremendous fascination on sb 替換 sb. be interested in sth.

  google 替換 search

  an army of 替換 a lot of

  The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers. Coincident with the advancement of science and technology, computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals. It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure!

  The dawn of the new century witnessed 是一個(gè)精彩句型,用來描述在某個(gè)時(shí)期發(fā)生了什么事情;

  Increasing popularity 替換 more and more popular

  Coincident with … 非常地道的詞匯,表達(dá)"與…一致"的意思,替換 With …

  Advancement 替換 development

  Pour into ( flood into / swarm into )替換 enter into

  Current ( currently )替換 now

  Appeal to sb. 替換 sb. be interested in sth.

  Growing individuals 替換 more and more people

  It is no exaggeration to say 經(jīng)典句型,說某事是毫不夸張的

  For a start, we can, freely, search desired information at any moment . Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. Additionally,recreations online by chatting, playing games, or delivering email.

 

  For a start 替換 To begin with

  We can, freely, search 用了插入語的寫作手法

  our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. 用了非常精彩的被動(dòng)

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