第三部分、范文
[diy寫作模板：填充階段]
第一段：稱呼
dear mr. president,
第二段：引出寫信的目的
主題句： this letter comes to you from one of your students.
擴(kuò)展句： in it, some opinions are put forward for you to reflect upon
第三段：對(duì)學(xué)校食堂的看法
主題句：as you know, our students are the main customers of the university canteen. but unfortunately, we don't find the service there satisfying sometimes.
擴(kuò)展句：
1、the food is not as nutritious as it should be. (舉例) as a result, some of us become thinner and weaker at university.
2、besides, sometimes the canteen people just bring us steamed bread with their dirty bare hands.
3、and what's more, the fare is also a little higher at university.
第四段：別人對(duì)食堂看法
主題句：some people may argue that measures have been taken and things are improving there.
擴(kuò)展句：
1、for instance, ic cards have taken the place of money in the canteed, and the attitude of the service people is also changing.
2、but in my opinon, progress is not so quick and thorough.
第五段：結(jié)尾，表明自己看法
結(jié)尾句：to be belief, though a bit dissatisfied with the present canteen conditions,
擴(kuò)展句：i do believe that, with the efforts of all people concerned, we can solved the problems there. thanks.
第三部分、范文
dear mr. president,
this letter comes to you from one of your students.in it, some opinions are put forward for you to reflect upon.
as you know, our students are the main customers of the university canteen. but unfortunately, we don't find the service there satisfying sometimes.the food is not as
nutritious as it should be. as a result, some of us become thinner and weaker at university.besides, sometimes the canteen people just bring us steamed bread with their dirty bare
hands.and what's more, the fare is also a little higher at university.
some people may argue that measures have been taken and things are improving there.for instance, ic cards have taken the place of money in the canteed, and the attitude
of the service people is also changing.but in my opinon, progress is not so quick and thorough
china finally succeeded in jointing the wto after many's efforts.this event will influence the economy in china greatly.
jointing the wto brings china many benefits and opportunities.as a member coutry, china can enjoy many rights that can boost the development of the economy in china.what's
more, the chinese people can buy productd of high quality with less pay.
every thing has two aspects.joining the wto can also bring us some challenges. for example, some producers may be wiped out because of the intense competition. in
addition, it will be more difficult for us to get a job, as the requirement for the employees will become higher.
however, this great event does more good than harm to us.what we should do is to improve ourselves to become qualified for certain positions and live a better life.
第一部分、四六級(jí)作文：英文信函題型作文diy
寫作步驟
要求考生根據(jù)提綱寫一封英文書信，如2005年12月六級(jí)作文、2005年1月四六級(jí)作文、2004年6月四六級(jí)作文、2004年1月四級(jí)作文。對(duì)這類題型，通常分為5個(gè)步驟來寫：
第一、文章開頭：稱呼
第二段、寒暄語句，引出寫信的目的：
寒暄句+主題句(注：寒暄句和主題句可以是同一個(gè)句子)
第三段、根據(jù)提綱擴(kuò)展主體段落：
主題句+擴(kuò)展句1+擴(kuò)展句2+擴(kuò)展句3
第四段、表明自己的觀點(diǎn)，并結(jié)束書信主體段落
在最后要他談自己的看法
第五段、寒暄句+落款
第二部分、英文信函題型作文diy寫作范文練習(xí)
[實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練]
directions：for this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic a letter to the university president about the canteen service campus. you should write at least 120 words and you should base your composition on the outline below:
假如你是李明，請(qǐng)你就本學(xué)校食堂的狀況給校長(zhǎng)寫一封信，內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括：食堂的飯菜質(zhì)量、價(jià)格、環(huán)境、服務(wù)等，可以是表?yè)P(yáng)，也可以是批評(píng)建議，也可以都有。
[diy寫作模板：架構(gòu)階段]
第一段：稱呼
dear mr. president,
第二段：引出寫信的目的
主題句： this letter comes to you from ____.
擴(kuò)展句： in it, some opinions are put forward for you to reflect upon
第三段：對(duì)學(xué)校食堂正面的看法
主題句：as you know, _____ . but unfortunately, ______.
擴(kuò)展句：1、___. (舉例) as a result, _____.
2、besides, ______.
3、and what's more, _____.
第四段：對(duì)學(xué)校食堂負(fù)面的看法
主題句：some people may argue that ____.
擴(kuò)展句：1、for instance, ____ and ____.
2、but in my opinon, ______.
第五段：結(jié)尾，表明自己看法
結(jié)尾句：to be belief, though a bit dissatisfied with _____.
擴(kuò)展句：i do believe that, with the efforts of all people concerned, we can solved the problems there. thanks. li ming
[diy寫作模板：填充階段]
第一段：稱呼
dear mr. president,
第二段：引出寫信的目的
主題句： this letter comes to you from one of your students.
擴(kuò)展句： in it, some opinions are put forward for you to reflect upon
第三段：對(duì)學(xué)校食堂的看法
主題句：as you know, our students are the main customers of the university canteen. but unfortunately, we don't find the service there satisfying sometimes.
擴(kuò)展句：
1、the food is not as nutritious as it should be. (舉例) as a result, some of us become thinner and weaker at university.
2、besides, sometimes the canteen people just bring us steamed bread with their dirty bare hands.
3、and what's more, the fare is also a little higher at university.
第四段：別人對(duì)食堂看法
主題句：some people may argue that measures have been taken and things are improving there.
擴(kuò)展句：
1、for instance, ic cards have taken the place of money in the canteed, and the attitude of the service people is also changing.
2、but in my opinon, progress is not so quick and thorough.
第五段：結(jié)尾，表明自己看法
結(jié)尾句：to be belief, though a bit dissatisfied with the present canteen conditions,
擴(kuò)展句：i do believe that, with the efforts of all people concerned, we can solved the problems there. thanks.
第三部分、范文
dear mr. president,
this letter comes to you from one of your students.in it, some opinions are put forward for you to reflect upon.
as you know, our students are the main customers of the university canteen. but unfortunately, we don't find the service there satisfying sometimes.the food is not as nutritious as it should be. as a result, some of us become thinner and weaker at university.besides, sometimes the canteen people just bring us steamed bread with their dirty bare hands.and what's more, the fare is also a little higher at university.
some people may argue that measures have been taken and things are improving there.for instance, ic cards have taken the place of money in the canteed, and the attitude of the service people is also changing.but in my opinon, progress is not so quick and thorough.
