2012考研英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作：用亮點(diǎn)詞句來(lái)替換

作文是各類(lèi)英語(yǔ)考試中得分較低的一種題型，究其原因，除了平時(shí)缺少練習(xí)之外，同學(xué)們還缺乏作文得分技巧。同學(xué)們需要掌握一定的作文模板和熟悉大量的話(huà)題作文，純模板會(huì)很僵化缺乏彈性，而話(huà)題作文可以更好的拓展思維，例如話(huà)題寫(xiě)作160篇里的高分佳句很實(shí)用?？佳杏⒄Z(yǔ)寫(xiě)作的提高需要大量細(xì)節(jié)的分析和磨練，其中一個(gè)重要的主題是關(guān)于英語(yǔ)創(chuàng)作的重要規(guī)律--seeking variety (追求語(yǔ)言豐富多變)。如何追求變化？下面舉幾個(gè)具體的例子，從各種角度給出句型轉(zhuǎn)換的方式，提供一些思路。如果能在作文中設(shè)置一些詞匯和句型的閃光點(diǎn)，必定使你的作文如虎添翼。

 

一、注意段首句式的變化

 

圖畫(huà)作文的段首句往往是"如圖所示"或"從圖畫(huà)中可以看出"之類(lèi)，下面為經(jīng)常采用的一些句型：

 

As is shown in the picture,

As can be seen from the picture,

It is vividly shown in the picture that......

We can see in this picture that ......

It is of considerable interest to see in the bizarre picture that......

 

二、適當(dāng)用被動(dòng)替換主動(dòng)，這樣能更客觀(guān)地反映事實(shí)。

 

句子開(kāi)頭不要總是用we / I (比如寫(xiě)結(jié)尾時(shí)不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to. ) 舉個(gè)經(jīng)典結(jié)尾的例子：It is, therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that. By doing so，its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively。

 

三、一句話(huà)用不同的句式來(lái)表達(dá)

 

為了加強(qiáng)同學(xué)們對(duì)語(yǔ)法知識(shí)在寫(xiě)作中的靈活應(yīng)用，下面給出一句話(huà)的14種句式及語(yǔ)言調(diào)整的效果，內(nèi)容上沒(méi)有太大差異，但是請(qǐng)同學(xué)們仔細(xì)辨別每句話(huà)所側(cè)重的句式：

 

1.使用表語(yǔ)從句

 

The picture shows two people reading the announcement on a billboard, and being shocked at the message. The reason is that the billboard is advertising a "sale of the dead bodies"。

 

2.使用介詞短語(yǔ)

 

In the picture, two people are reading the announcement and they are being shocked at the message of "a sale of dead bodies" on a billboard。

 

3.使用疑問(wèn)句

 

The picture shows two people reading the announcement on a billboard. Why are they so shocked? The reason is that the billboard is advertising a "sale of the dead bodies"。

 

4.使用原因狀語(yǔ)從句

 

The picture shows two people reading the announcement on a billboard. As the billboard is advertising a "sale of the dead bodies"， they are shocked at the message。

 

5.使用結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句

 

The picture shows two people reading the announcement on a billboard. The billboard is advertising a "sale of the dead bodies" so that they are shocked at the message。

 

6.使用時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句

 

In the picture, while the two people are reading the announcement on the billboard about "a sale of the dead bodies"， they are being deeply shocked。

 

7.使用分詞短語(yǔ)

 

In the picture, reading the message of a ‘sale of the dead bodies" advertised on the billboard, the two people are deeply shocked。

 

8.使用主動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)

 

In the picture, the announcement on a billboard advertising a "sale of the dead bodies" shocks the two people reading it。

 

9.使用There be 結(jié)構(gòu)

 

In the picture, there is an announcement on a billboard advertising a "sale of the dead bodies" and shocking the two people reading it。

 

10.使用倒裝句

 

On a billboard is an announcement advertising a "sale of the dead bodies". The two people reading it are being shocked。

 

11.使用定語(yǔ)從句

 

In the picture, the announcement on a billboard which advertises a "sale of the dead bodies" shocks the two people reading it。

 

12.強(qiáng)調(diào)句

 

In the picture, it is the announcement on a billboard advertising a "sale of the dead bodies" that shocks the two people reading it。

 

13.虛擬語(yǔ)氣

 

In the picture, were it not for the announcement on the billboard advertising a "sale of the dead bodies"， the two people would not be so shocked。

 

四。盡量復(fù)雜作文中的句式

 

It is of considerable interest to observe in this bizarre caricature that a couple of citizens, reading an announcement issued on the billboard, are taken aback as a result of the astounding message which informs people of a "sale of dead bodies"。

 

句中使用的詞組包括：be of considerable interest, a couple of, taken aback, as a result of, inform sb. of 長(zhǎng)句采用的特殊語(yǔ)法包括：賓語(yǔ)從句+分詞結(jié)構(gòu)做插入語(yǔ)+分詞作后置定語(yǔ)(issued)+被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)+原因短語(yǔ)+定語(yǔ)從句。